20 Books of Summer, 1-3: Ceremony, Vathek, Erewhon

Here are the first three books and reviews of this year’s 20 BoS! The first has a one-word title but is technically not on the Guardian top 1000 novels list. That is very much a failing of that list: Ceremony has been highly influential and definitely deserves a place in either the “War and travel” or “State of the nation” sections. The second and third both have monologic (monologous?) titles and appear on the Guardian list (both in the rather broad “Science fiction and fantasy” section, in another instance of the literary establishment being unable to grasp the idea of multiple subgenres, modes, or traditions of un-realist fiction).

Ceremony, by Leslie Marmon Silko (1977): This tale of the gradual healing of a Laguna Pueblo man with severe PTSD from his time in the Pacific theatre of WWII strikes me as the kind of book it would be very easy to teach to high schoolers. That’s both not a bad thing and a somewhat telling thing. There’s a lot of symbolism (the herd of skinny spotted cows; the physiological trait of being light-eyed and what it means about a person’s ancestry; the role and function of alcohol in mediating between the novel’s characters, particularly Native men who are now-unwanted US Army veterans). There are a lot of parallels: the spiritual sickness of Tayo, our protagonist, and the spiritual sickness of the land in which he grew up, which now contains a mine for the uranium that went into the atomic bomb; the interspersed Native myths about quests to save the people from physical starvation and the efforts of Native healers Ku’oosh and Betonie to save Tayo from emotional starvation. It reminded me sometimes of a less oblique Winter in the Blood or a less self-consciously stylised Cormac McCarthy (the latter mostly in the matter-of-fact descriptions of action within landscape: “That last summer, before the war, he got up before dawn and rode the bay mare south to the spring in the narrow canyon. The water oozed out from the dark orange sandstone at the base of the long mesa. He waited for the sun to come over the hills.”—p. 86). It’s super atmospheric, even if it also seems to contain less plot than its length could hold. I’m not convinced by the ending, in which Tayo’s inaction leads to the death of another Native man at the hands of two more; the idea seems to be that by not resorting to violence, he has reached his cure or salvation, but it seems hard to reconcile to the fact that he might have been able to save a life and chose not to. I would love to read more considered criticism, especially Native criticism, of Ceremony; my edition just has a short, appreciative but not very informative foreword by Larry McMurtry. Source: bought secondhand from the Oxfam bookshop in Herne Hill

Vathek, by William Beckford (1786): When I worked at Heywood Hill, a customer once listed this as his favourite book. I found it an unusual choice then, but now—having read it—I find myself almost speechless, not because Vathek is poorly written but because Beckford’s extreme youth (21 when he wrote it), inconceivable wealth (heir to £100,000 p.a. in sugar money at a time when £400 p.a. guaranteed a life of leisure), and predatory nature (he was sexually abusing a thirteen-year-old boy at the time of Vathek‘s writing) is so apparent within it. It’s Gothic, but not as we know it: Radcliffean feudal tyranny becomes Arabian Nights-style oriental despotism, gloomy European castles become decadent Middle Eastern palaces. There’s some Faust and some Milton in Vathek’s appalling bargain: the sacrifices of innocent children and his own eternal soul for the gratification of curiosity and desire. The lingering, caressing gaze of the narration on the barely-adolescent boy Gulchenrouz is also squicky (Vathek ends up with G’s female cousin, Nouronihar, but Gulchenrouz gets all of the sensual descriptive imagery). But the novel, although legible as a moral fable about an overreacher’s fall, always seems more nuanced than that. Vathek has enormous drive and charisma, despite the despotism. There’s a lot of humour (“The subjects of the Caliph, like their sovereign, being great admirers of women and apricots from Kirmith…”, p. 10). It’s better written than many novels of its decade, the prose only rarely becoming empurpled, and remarkably well researched, with nearly as many pages of Beckford’s notes as there are of text. And the hellish palace of Eblis (Islam’s Devil) doesn’t scare Vathek’s mother, the extraordinary witch Carathis, who takes such full advantage of the few days’ grace before her eternal damnation that the narration can’t help but admire her dauntlessness. A fascinating confection. Source: borrowed from Bromley libraries #LoveYourLibrary

Erewhon, by Samuel Butler (1872): “You may say that it is your misfortune to be criminal; I answer that it is your crime to be unfortunate.”—p. 117. Thus does an Erewhonian judge sentence a young man who has been found guilty of pulmonary consumption to life imprisonment with hard labour—for in Erewhon, those who commit moral crimes like theft or fraud are carefully nursed back to the path of rectitude, but those who are ill, poor, or unlucky are considered criminals and punished accordingly. Butler’s “nowhere” utopia was famous for challenging ideas about morality, religion and the state when it was published, but in this regard at least it feels not unlike contemporary America and Britain, where reliance on the healthcare or welfare systems is painted as shameful parasitism and punished by deliberately unsympathetic government policies. The eugenicist results—no one in Erewhon is anything other than conventionally attractive and physically robust—are obvious, but all the more unnerving to the contemporary reader for going largely unremarked upon. The same is true of our narrator’s evangelicalism and extractive colonialist mindset: he only stumbles across Erewhon (implied to be in New Zealand) because he is seeking unclaimed land that he might be able to start exploiting before anyone else, while his belief that the Erewhonians are the lost tribes of Israel impels him to plan for his spiritual enrichment by being the one who converts them to Christianity, and later his material enrichment by forming a limited liability company to organise their enslavement. It’s hard to know how ironically Butler intends us to take any of it, and he’s not very good at character development, but I don’t regret reading this—an often thought-provoking, often infuriating example of the utopian travel story. Source: borrowed from Bromley libraries #LoveYourLibrary

12 thoughts on “20 Books of Summer, 1-3: Ceremony, Vathek, Erewhon

  1. Better you than me on the Butler, but I’m intrigued by Silko, who’s always been on the edge of my awareness. I appreciate your nuanced words about it. And yeah sure would be nice to have someone other than McMurtry (who I love but…) introduce the book.

    1. Right?! This was a 25th anniversary edition so I appreciate that some of the immediate candidates that now spring to mind (Tommy Orange! Layli Long Soldier! Louise Erdrich!) might not have been household names back in 2002, but man. N. Scott Momaday was still alive, could’ve asked him.

      The Butler has some redeeming qualities. Oddly, I found the travel sections at the beginning and end—before he reaches Erewhon and after he leaves it—considerably more interesting as pieces of fiction than the middle bits about moral philosophy, which seems to be the opposite opinion to absolutely everyone else.

  2. Is it the kind of thing that is more interesting to think about than actually read?
    I’m finding it encouraging that the literary landscape of 2024 is so different than 2002…

    1. Yeah, probably. I think it’s indicative that I wrote most of my consideration of Erewhon while only about ⅔ of the way through; there aren’t that many surprises.

  3. ‘another instance of the literary establishment being unable to grasp the idea of multiple subgenres, modes, or traditions of un-realist fiction’ – oh god this is so true, especially weird to lump an obvious classic utopian novel in there

    1. Isn’t it?! I would admit Vathek as fantasy at a stretch—there are angels, djinni, and demons—but Erewhon is, like Gulliver’s Travels or More’s own Utopia, at best a forerunner of certain schools of fantasy that develop later. It’s really mostly a philosophical essay.

  4. I’ve hesitated reading Vathek for a long time, the excuse being that I needed to reread Walpole’s The Castle of Otranto first; but truly the reason was that, knowing a bit about Beckford’s extraordinary life, I was reluctant to enter into the mindset of the novel. But now I’m wondering if I should just bite the bullet, so perhaps I’ll have you to thank – or perhaps blame! And your review of Erewhom also has me reconsidering. Hmm.

    1. You definitely don’t need Otranto fresh in memory to enjoy (or, you know, whatever the appropriate verb might be) Vathek. I actually did rather enjoy it; there’s immense entertainment value in the aggressive immorality/amorality of the protagonist and his mother, let alone his wife. Can’t say I’m a huge fan of the man himself, but although his interests and personality certainly are present within the novel, it also stands on its own well enough, and has a substantial enough plot, not to feel like you’re just reading someone writing about his own distasteful activities.

      Erewhon is quite boring in the middle bits but I liked the trek over the mountains to get there and the balloon escape on the way back. I would also *love* to read more post-colonial work on it; my Penguin edition has a 1970 foreword by Peter Mudford which completely ignores all of that, which seems to me by far the most interesting element.

  5. The Silko does seem like the kind of thing that would be on high school curricula, perhaps before my time. Vathek is a very peculiar choice indeed of favourite book! I read Butler’s The Way of All Flesh in 2004 — I can remember lying on a sofa in my college’s study abroad office in Strasbourg, where I was visiting my roommate and some others during our respective year abroad experiences. More of a traditional bildungsroman and it didn’t tempt me to read anything else by him, but utopian novels are always at least of historical interest.

    1. I’m pretty sure Ceremony actually was on high school reading lists in the ’90s-’00s—it was never one I read but it might have been a summer reading option, possibly. I’m actually quite interested in The Way of All Flesh now, since Butler apparently had a lot of tension with his father over Anglicanism and there are traces of that tension in Erewhon; apparently even more in TWoAF. Isn’t it lovely to have such a specific memory of reading a book?

  6. Goodness! I read Vathek ages ago (well, literally decades if I’m honest) and I don’t remember any of that! I’m pretty sure I still have it somewhere so I may have to go back and revisit it! I possibly even read Beckford’s travel memoir…

    1. Hoo boy, it’s wild. The cheerful manner in which the parents of the sacrificial children are tricked into letting their kids go off into the wilderness and then be hurled over a cliff is actually pretty funny. Oh, and I had the OWC edition pictured, which reproduces Beckford’s (and his frenemy/collaborator Samuel Henley’s) seven million footnotes and *then* has the OWC editor commenting *on those*, which gets a little fractal. Bet Beckford’s travel memoir is worth reading.

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